Romance Moisture
Can a rose help to thaw ice? Comments and critique welcome, thanks?
"Oh, Dublin Bay. How apt the name",
the smile crept on her blushing face.
A climbing rose of ruby red,
revived the fondness for a place.
Would he remember? Would he care?
Did he still have a heart of ice?
Or could her gift, a token thought
bring back a time in paradise?
Great atmosphere in Grafton Street,
a touch of Guiness and romance.
The leprechauns and Irish eyes
with all the fun of River Dance.
A chance of peace, for thaw to start,
he viewed the package with surprise.
Then when he saw the rose's name
the moisture gathered in his eyes.
Cold glacier began to melt,
sharp thorns had almost been removed.
She felt the heat of summer sun
and knew the outlook had improved.
HH - I love Ireland and the Irish culture, it is rich indeed. I have worked there both on business and spent short breaks there. The people are warm and welcoming.
Wow! I don't get excited about love poems very often, but this is really good. You take the readers directly to the adjacent barstool.
If I may...
For me, Stanza 5 Line 1 is one beat too short. In my opinion, the 7 count there needs one more strike of the gong...
NARS MAC NUXE collective Haul
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