Passion Edt
First-time poet needs some critique! Also taking impressions! Anyone?
Too long to post here (damn 1000 character limit)
It's a poem that sums up my not boring part of my recent life.
Read here: http://pondero-animus.blogspot.com/2006/04/passion-and-compassion.html
Okay, so I'm not really a first-time poet; I've loved to express things in words. If there's any critique that comes to mind, or impressions, tell me.
Right now, it's 12:01 EDT, so thanks, insomniacs!!!
Thanks, maynardlibras. I love gettin' critique if it's constructive. Helps me get better at everything.
***And as a side note, maybe I shouldn't have posted this so late. Now it's just gonna get old and no one looks at posts after an hour...x_x
*yawns*
I agree with maynardlibras...try and work it up a bit like having different rhymes on each paragraph. Nice choice in words, I give it a 9!
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