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tell me whats wrong with this?

council estates bouncing havans of hate,no saving grace
only raving round the place,children copying what their seen,its obscene
worrying about green,burrying their dream,
cynicaly smoking zest,clinacly broke and depreesed
the drug scence is humuongus,morphine mixed with fungus
dealing wheeling stealing in the bacterial streets
so they can be kneeling to material treats,sick of serial and sweets
braking the law to reach new feets,kids need new role models quick
because the dole players are thick,standing still like a brick,
underage illegal thinking leads to thunderous rage and drinking
life sleping and shrinking,but hows to blame its the goverment
when they gona discover its all bent,half sealing cracks with rubber not cement,
from the slums themself but wearing a posh accent
i aint agrresive so i aint saying this in spite,in my opion
the bark is worse than the bite,so i dont fight i leave my blackmark when i write

I like the vivid vocabulary and the constant rhyming. I'd like to actually hear you spit this over a beat though. That's probably the only "problem".

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